Someone wrote in [community profile] exsiliumooc 2013-11-09 10:19 am (UTC)

I've noticed you can often leave brief responses when tagging back others that usually make it difficult to continue a thread, especially if it has yet to reach a resolution. While with Arya this happens often, I've noted this has also been a trend between Vanozza and Han. While it is to my understanding Arya is a closed off character, responses from her are not just brief and unclear in dialogue; there is nothing to work with at all, not even a thought or action bracket to lend a hand toward the other person you're threading with. Again, this is not just with Arya, therefore I think it would be helpful once in a while to try and avoid one word responses from characters where it won't help to carry the thread forward.

On another note, it's come to my attention in that sometimes your responses in turn pay little to no attention to what's been brought up in either conversation or action, the latter more. Either cues are simply left ignored or details are contradicted and threads are no longer following the same wave length. I would caution you to take the extra time to re-read your fellow players' responses before tagging them back as it would help balance both sides of the story.

Thanks for reading.

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