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exsilium HELP ([personal profile] initiateshelp) wrote in [community profile] exsiliumooc2013-11-08 09:41 pm
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HMD » ❝ how's my driving? ❞

⚔ HOW'S MY DRIVING? ⚔


Welcome to Exsilium's game-wide HMD! These will now be occurring once every two months, instead of once every three.

How It Works:
The gamewide HMD is an opportunity for players to come together and bring each other feedback about one another's playing. Constructive criticism is encouraged, however what that means is that it must be constructive. If you are going to offer up criticism, we encourage that you provide suggestions to the player within your critique. We are here to improve! It is also acceptable to let someone know if you enjoy their playing, but note that unhelpful or empty responses ("Oh, I love you so much!!", "Your playing is bad and you should feel bad.") without any real substance are discouraged.

If you like what a player is doing, tell them exactly what it is and why! If you have questions about their playing, this is what this forum is for as well.
It is not mandatory, and you have no obligation to respond if you don't wish to.

Anonymous commenting is enabled for the sake of anonymous crit, and IP logging is on for the sake of continued accountability. Only moderators will see IP addresses and they will only be checked if things get out of hand. Please remember to be thoughtful and respectful in your crit-giving. Full Disclosure: The moderator team may still be given anonymous, non-IP logged criticism here at the suggestions page or their personal HMD posts.


Please fill out the form below and leave a comment with your name or handle in the subject line!

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[personal profile] pixieboots 2013-11-09 01:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Lyrie

Character(s) you play:
Dick Grayson | Robin ★ DC Comics ★ [personal profile] pixieboots
Personal HMD(s): in his journal!
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: i would prefer logged in if at all possible!
Additional Comments: I’ve been dealing with some RL issues for a while and I had a recent death in the family which I know has affected my ability to be as fast and consistent as I would like! However a lot of that has been resolved now and I’m definitely looking forward to being more engaged and giving CR more to work with in the future. If I’ve dropped anything on you or made our CR hard to build on for any reason please feel free to let me know because I would love to address the issue and fix it now yes right now.

ICly Dick has been in game for about ten months, has turned thirteen, and while definitively he’s still mostly a really sweet, upbeat kid who's still motivated by the same stuff he was before he’s also been traumatized by game plot and by learning what he would consider unpleasant stuff about his future. Because of a combination of factors he’s become less accepting of that stuff over time instead of more (other than when lots of positive CR is in place already) but I always want to know if that seems weird or if I’m overplaying it at all! Mostly he just needs time to work through it and I do anticipate him getting over it and moving on with life eventually ok I promise.

And! as I know I’ve mentioned in previous HMD’s Dick’s canon point is super early and also somewhat sketchy and weird and self-contradictory because comics. I forever desire feedback on how this is being handled in game and how it affects his voice and if he ever sounds off or undicklike please also feel free to let me know!
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ELLE

[personal profile] firstroar 2013-11-09 02:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Character(s) you play:
Martin Darkov ★ Original ★ theguideless
Jericho ★ Teen Titans (animated) ★ eyecontact
Blue ★ Toward the Terra ★ firstroar
Personal HMD(s): Blue might have one I'm on my phone I can't check
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Ok
Additional Comments: All 3 are a year+ in-game so circumstances have changed since initial arrival
anonymiss: (♡)

[personal profile] anonymiss 2013-11-09 02:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Aura

Character(s) you play:
Ella Ellis ★ Original ★ [personal profile] lar
Charlie Dyer ★ Original ★ [personal profile] falla
Personal HMD(s): Here
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes
Additional Comments: I've been on a funk for a while, what with all the drops. Kind of trying to redefine things, and app more seriously later on. Besides that, college is kind of pressuring me as of late, but other than cutting some of my usual RP time I'm slowly getting on top of things. I did want to be more active this month, but considering I already missed the new Transport log and the zombie one I'll be putting all my energy (most my energy?) on the mutiny plot, so yeah, I'll be around.
salvagedsoul: (fanart // lil MPEs)

[personal profile] salvagedsoul 2013-11-09 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Amanda

Character(s) you play:
Kaworu Nagisa ★ Neon Genesis Evangelion ★ [personal profile] salvagedsoul
Joy P. Buckhead ★ orignal ★ [personal profile] jackanope
Personal HMD(s): There's one on each of their journals, and here is my universal HMD.
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes
Additional Comments: Well, I guess with Kaworu the big thing since the last HMD was finally hooking up with Shinji. I'd be interested in anything people had to say about how I handled that, either positive or negative. But I haven't been terribly active the past three months, so I think that would be the only specific additional thing to add. Thank you!
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[personal profile] infiltrative 2013-11-09 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Hati

Character(s) you play: Huell 'RUSH' Lamphier ★ original ★ [personal profile] infiltrative
Personal HMD(s): Here.
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes
Additional Comments: I know I've been scarce this month, but other than that I got nothing.
fe_male: through. The most impressive thing is that Coulson got Fury to sign off on a disciplinary form for a toaster. (misc: paperwork must've finally gone)

[personal profile] fe_male 2013-11-09 02:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Jansen

Character(s) you play:
Tony Stark ★ MCU ★ [personal profile] fe_male
Personal HMD(s): tally-yo. (also mod-style.)
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes, if necessary.
Additional Comments: Tony's been in game for just over a year and a half, and has gone home and returned twice, and seen at least six close friends or teammates come and go in that time period, as well as various close CR. Recently, Pepper left, followed by a JARVIS with a body, and with having likely lost what he was trying to rebuild with CM, he's going to be in a moderately negative state again for a while. There's already several plans to get drunk (or high!) with people and do stupid shit, and he'll probably be making dumb things and blowing things up in the VR room because that's what Tony does. I'm also trying to figure out if building something that gets out of his own control could be something fun to play with.

ON THE OTHER HAND shit in my life is suddenly calming down from the last two or three months or so, so I'm hoping that he'll be a little more present as he should be.
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[personal profile] deadlybanker 2013-11-09 03:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Cocorose

Character(s) you play:
Giovanni Auditore ★ Assassin's Creed ★ [personal profile] deadlybanker
Personal HMD(s): I do have one!
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes
Additional Comments: He has been a touch homesick, but I don't think there is anything that would make him unrecognizable.
nosebleeds: (058)

[personal profile] nosebleeds 2013-11-09 03:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Noodles

Character(s) you play:
Genesis ★ ORIGINAL ★ [personal profile] nosebleeds
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: discouraged
Additional Comments: i apologize for his existence
badnewsboy: ⎨ ᴇʟsᴏɴ ⎬ (pic#6834965)

[personal profile] badnewsboy 2013-11-09 03:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: veronica

Character(s) you play:
Loki ★ Marvel 616 ★ [personal profile] badnewsboy
Personal HMD(s): Dance dance dance dan-dan-dance
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Surely sure!
Additional Comments: Not much here! I'm really enjoying the game so far. Still kind of getting into the swing of things. Loki's stuck in an odd period of transition where he's pretty sure that he's dead, but he isn't quite sure what exactly he's doing here. I think he's mostly going to kind of start jumping into things trying to help people ... in his ... own way ... and re-direct his focus until he's really forced to deal with the aftermath of what happened to him. OH THERE WAS ALSO ANOTHER LOKI HERE and he knows that and it's got him in a bit of a huff. There will be a lot of network reading for him to do.
ultragorgeous: (totes gentlemanly)

[personal profile] ultragorgeous 2013-11-09 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Dee

Character(s) you play:
Kirian Dawningsun ★ Original- Warcraft ★ [personal profile] timewalking
Dist the Rose Roach ★ Tales of the Abyss ★ [personal profile] ultragorgeous
Carlos ★ Welcome to Night Vale ★ [personal profile] imperfectness
Personal HMD(s): On their journals.
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: I'd really much rather you stay logged-in. I don't freak out at people or anything, so you don't need to worry of me getting upset with you.
Additional Comments: Kirian has been updated and is thus a little...softer? Not as intentionally an asshole just for the sake of being an asshole.

As an OOC note, I know my tags come very slowly and that sometimes I just drop things altogether. I think, especially last month, I may have overestimated myself and had too many large posts.
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[personal profile] celestial_wizard 2013-11-09 03:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Mai

Character(s) you play:
Lucy Heartfilia ★ Fairy Tail ★ [personal profile] celestial_wizard
Personal HMD(s): Here
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes
Additional Comments: N/A
trustycrowbar: (Glasses)

[personal profile] trustycrowbar 2013-11-09 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Eek

Character(s) you play:
Gordon Freeman ★ Half-Life series ★ [personal profile] trustycrowbar
Sonic the Hedgehog ★ Sonic series ★ [personal profile] mach_n_roll
Personal HMD(s): On their journals
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: No.
Additional Comments: Sonic is starting to be worn a little rough by the endless dismal shit that happens in Exsilium, so he's been not really as happy and optimistic as he usually is. He'll perk up if they start having true and useful successes again.
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[personal profile] notadamnvampire 2013-11-09 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Lan

Character(s) you play:
Johnny D'Amico ★ ORIGINAL ★ [personal profile] charming_jerk
Alucard Anselm ★ ORIGINAL ★ [personal profile] notadamnvampire
Elmer C. Albatross ★ BACCANO! ★ [personal profile] keep_smiling

Personal HMD(s): Each character has one as the first entry of their journals.
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: No
Additional Comments: This has been a slow month for me due to having had a con to go to, and a class that has given me much more homework than initially thought. I had to drop a lot of tags but I'm back on track now!
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[personal profile] alphonse 2013-11-09 05:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Nikki

Character(s) you play:
Alphonse Elric ★ Fullmetal Alchemist ★ [personal profile] alphonse
Personal HMD(s): Here!
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Of course!
Additional Comments: Nah.
reunites: (make sure the soundman;)

[personal profile] reunites 2013-11-09 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Pi

Character(s) you play:
Lloyd Irving ★ Tales of Symphonia ★ [personal profile] reunites
Personal HMD(s): boom
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes, go ahead!
Additional Comments: HE IS BRAND NEW so there is that. Also worth mentioning that he's from Kratos' ending, so there are certain differences there.
eyecaptivating: (yes i am swimming)

[personal profile] eyecaptivating 2013-11-09 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Alex

Character(s) you play:
Momo Kisaragi ★ Kagerou Days ★ [personal profile] eyecaptivating
Hajime Ichinose ★ Gatchaman Crowds ★ [personal profile] dayplanners
Personal HMD(s): here and here!
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes. If for some reason it's not, slap me.
Additional Comments: Momo's been slowly dealing with finding out that things are nowhere near as easy here as they were back home, so there's that. And the girl whose death led to her brother becoming a shut-in has disappeared from Exsilium, so that's something else to deal with.

AAAAND Hajime's kind of a weird character, so I'm slowly starting to try to get the right voice for her. And that's it, besides the fact that I've been ridiculously slow this week for reasons.
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[personal profile] jailbreaks 2013-11-09 06:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name:Raine

Character(s) you play:
Yuri Lowell ★ Tales of Vesperia ★ [personal profile] jailbreaks
Personal HMD(s): Here
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: No
Additional Comments: Due to a lot of personal things I've been non-existent and trying to get back into the game. Other than that, I don't really have much to say~
niehaus: (⇢ sassy scientist)

[personal profile] niehaus 2013-11-09 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Imran

Character(s) you play:
Cosima Niehaus ★ Orphan Black ★ [personal profile] niehaus
Personal HMD(s): here
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes!
Additional Comments: Cosima is extremely sick right now so probably a bit more easily irritated than usual.
Edited 2013-11-09 18:38 (UTC)
sestra: (67)

[personal profile] sestra 2013-11-09 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Tomato

Character(s) you play:
Helena ★ Orphan Black ★ [personal profile] sestra
Personal HMD(s): doop
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes!
Additional Comments: Nnnnope, not that I can think of! She's not the most social of people, so she hasn't been out too much yet??
blossomgale: ([anime] snowphie)

[personal profile] blossomgale 2013-11-09 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Joly

Character(s) you play: Sophie Lhant ★ Tales of Graces ★ ([personal profile] blossomgale)
Personal HMD(s): Here
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes
Additional Comments: Tagging speed is something I'm already aware of. I want to become involved more, but I also find that I have trouble keeping up with too many things. orz Sophie has been around since... December of last year, I think? Wow. She's been around awhile and may have started "growing up" mentally quite a bit and acting more human. She is from the near end of Lineage & Legacies, before the final battle.
Edited 2013-11-09 18:50 (UTC)
wolfuncaged: ([Journal] Too much happy)

[personal profile] wolfuncaged 2013-11-09 06:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name:TF

Character(s) you play:
Fenris ★ Dragon Age ★
Heath Burns ★ Monster High ★
Personal HMD(s): Fenris | Heath | Personal
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes on all!
Additional Comments: None right now!
debtor: (BONK ★ a no good rabble-rouser)

[personal profile] debtor 2013-11-09 07:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Pol!

Characters you play:
Allen Walker ★ D.Gray-man ★ this account!
Eren Jaeger ★ Attack on Titan ★ [personal profile] bitedown
Personal HMD(s): on both of their journals
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: yep
Additional Comments:
Allen is from an early canon point (pre-Ark arc) but has been in Exsilium for ALMOST A YEAR (god...) and everything he's gone through and learned since arriving has had an effect on him.

To be honest, I've been struggling getting in the tagging groove with Eren, though. Working on that!!
Edited 2013-11-09 19:30 (UTC)
occlusion: (overworked and very underpaid)

[personal profile] occlusion 2013-11-09 09:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Bri

Character(s) you play:
Seiichirou Tatsumi ★ Yami no Matsuei ★ [personal profile] occlusion
Personal HMD(s): Here!
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes
Additional Comments: There has not been any life-changing event thus far, and I haven't really gotten as around Exsilium as I'd like. I blame it on college. At any rate, I will be working on getting around more!
crocodilesmiles: (☇ sideglance questioning)

[personal profile] crocodilesmiles 2013-11-10 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Ishmael.

Character(s) you play: Collette ★ Animorphs[personal profile] crocodilesmiles
Personal HMD(s): MOD HMD is listed on first comment.
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes, here and on the MOD HMD.
Additional Comments: I've been on hiatus since November 1st, hence minimally around for (mostly) backtagging or previously discussed plots. Will be putting up Moonsgiving later this evening (forward dated!).
promises_to_keep: (aroo?)

[personal profile] promises_to_keep 2013-11-10 12:48 am (UTC)(link)
Player Name: Kari

Character(s) you play: Lea ★ Kingdom Hearts ★ [personal profile] promises_to_keep
Personal HMD(s): here!
Anonymous Commenting Allowed?: Yes
Additional Comments: I know I just got back and haven't done a lot yet, but I was here for a while before too, so if there's something you didn't get the chance to say before you may.

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